UB00402 Academic Reading & Writing Semester 2 Session 2014-15Essay outlineGroup no: Madeleine, Wani, Nadia, Riza, TamieEssay Title: Minimizing the escalating cases of baby dumping among teenagers in Selangor.IntroductionHook line:Baby dumping cases in Malaysia has been chronic and gaining a lot of attentiondue to the number of cases that drastically increases year by year especially inSelangor. The body of a baby girl found in a bag at a bus stop near the SultanIsmail Hospital, Johor Bahru in the morning. Also there a baby found buried.News Straits Times on 18th July 2010 reported that a fetus was found buried bythe roadside in Jalan 12, Bandar Puteri Puchong, Selangor ( Noordin, 2012)General information about topic:The statistics from the Headquarters of Roayal Malaysia Police (PDRM)indicated that there were 407 cases of baby dumping for the past five yearstarting from 2005 until 7th April 2010. On average, there are 68 cases everyyear and these cases keep increasing ( Noordin, 2012)Thesis statement:This essay will provide solution to the escalating cases of baby dumping by thehelp of family guidance, nourish moral and religion, introduced sex education,stricter the laws by the government and provide baby hatches by NGO to copewith this serious cases.Background paragraphTopic sentence:(How did the problem start?)The problem start when teenagers are involved in illegitimate sexual relationshipand feel guilty for their wrong doings. They are afraid and feel ashamed to facethe community and are haunted by the society's view and lead them to dumptheir babies. They think that by dumping their baby as their final solution fortheir wrong doings.Supporting information:(Fact, detail, etc.)" Due to poverty, parents may work long hours, risking effective supervision oftheir adolescents from engaging in high-risk behavior that includes sexualactivities" (Omar k, Hasim s, Muhd N.A, 2010).Body paragraph 1Topic sentence:(Solution 1)One of the solution to handle the escalating cases of baby dumping amongteenagers in Selangor is by family guidance. Family have to take responsibilityto guide their children early ages to prevent the problem from happen.Supporting information:(Fact, detail, etc.)Parent are responsible to give the education to their children about the bad ofpre-marriage pregnancy that may lead to baby dumping cases.Evaluation:(How effective is solution?)By family guidance, strong and good communication between them canimprove. So, good appreciation to parents giving good advice can motivate thechildren to avoid pre-marriage relationship.
Cause and Effects of Baby Dumping
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Causes of Baby Dumping
One of the causes of baby dumping is teenagers are lack of sex education. Most of the parents failed to inject the knowledge of sex into the mind of their children when their children were small. They feel shy or uncomfortable when their children ask them about sex. Besides that, parents always assume that their children will know everything naturally when they become adult. They are giving less response to those questions and less clear explanation to their children. Parents are less giving a clear view about sex and always claim that their children are too small to know about sex. Most of the schools are facing the same problems. They do not have sex education as a compulsory teaching subject in school. Teachers…show more content…
Sometimes they happen suddenly and it is hard to understand why there needs to be change at all. Children are mostly affected by this kind of situation. If both their mother and father decided to a divorce and one cannot raise their child alone, tendency is that they will dump their child. This child will become homeless and found that they are alone. Also, the cause of baby dumping is the perpetrators didn’t get their family support. Once they tell their parents of their unexpected pregnancies, the family gets angry and started to blame the world about and questions how it happens. It is better be in the opposite way of thinking together how to help them, and provide the motivational e support that they need. Because at that stage,the pregnant woman are actually in the level of anxiousness to be charged guilty for their selves and their family. The anxiousness is actually identified as post-partum psychosis where the woman has change in their psycho ability that leads to act of baby dumping. Whereas some politicians think it causes conversely. Baby dumping happens because of perceptive of society to the mother that leads to them to abandon the baby. The society is not yet ready to be open-minded, they tend to have a very bad thought and perception towards the pregnant woman, makes them feel low, lost confidence to face the world, and in order to have it back, they decide to act repugnantly dump the baby. Baby dumping may also results